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hold onto me
in life and death.
let go of me
and catch your breath.
we're living like
we'll live again,
and death is just
the end of pain.
but I can't tell
a lie to you;
I sometimes want
to end it too.
so many have gone
the easy way,
and we forgot
what we used to say.
we miss the dead
and hold on tight,
but they have gone
to an endless night.
I hate to sit
and watch you burn,
but nothing else
will help us learn,
there's nothing I
can do this time
but listen to
your helpless cries.
and when we die
you follow me;
we'll meet the night
and cease to be.
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Yuesumi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful poem, great flow. I can almost read it like it's a song.
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jrrain Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you cx
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:iconyuesumi:
Yuesumi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :heart:
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iristeo Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
This is awesome!
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jrrain Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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