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Fine by jrrain Fine by jrrain
First couple lines of this poem I wrote the other day. I liked them for some reason. o,o
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:icondassa440:
dassa440 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
very well done
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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AhnnahMarina Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This speaks to me, especially right now. Too many times have I held one of those blades. 
Nice job.
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jrrain Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, I'm here if you need anything. I'm a great listener. <3
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AhnnahMarina Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, it is nice to be able to hear that, from someone I hardly even know, when people I know well put me down and act stupid.
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jrrain Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, I totally feel you on that. People you know well often take you for granted, though I'm not sure why. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
And we keep pretending everything is fine, while we die a little bit inside everyday.
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup... :/
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irishlad9216 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
I know so many people that do this.. most fuking annoying thing in the world to someone that actually loves that person... 
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, do you know why they do it? Talk to them about it? Do you try to help them in any way or do you just complain about how annoying it is that they don't go around spilling their problems on everyone? Cause if you don't understand them, then that's it, you don't understand them. They're probably going through a lot.
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irishlad9216 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
The main person that frustrated me the most by this was my first girlfriend. 
If I didn't understand why she was upset then she would be upset with me for not understanding. But at the same time, she fought explaining herself or telling me how she felt because perhaps she felt it made her look weak or something silly like that. So I would have to insist that she tell me what she actually meant until she finally did and then we could talk about it and I could listen and care for her in that way BUT other times she would say "Fine" in the same way and when i insist she either use a different word or explain better, she would just get pissed off because I didnt give up... -_- So either she was mad at me for insisting on knowing or she was upset because 'I didnt care enough to find out'  
So it bothers me when people say fine because it doesn't answer the question at all and it doesn't help the situation in any way... 
kind of like you showed in your poem. 
I can see how your poem can be so accurate from a certain point of view... I'm just showing you what one view of the opposite side can look like. 
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know exactly how much that hurts and I get what you're saying, but I think these people are just as confused as you are. It's hard to sort out emotions when there are a lot of really strong ones, and it's hard to get close to people.
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irishlad9216 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
It can be hard... but I'm one of those people that dwells on things untill I understand them, including myself. I understand myself pretty well and I wish more people took the time to understand themselves... 
That doesnt mean I dont get upset or have feelings it doesnt even make me less sensitive much... It just helps me to understand why I feel what I feel, and to react in the best way... most of the time D: So yeah... I wasnt very confused, in fact... I think I understood her better than she did.
Actually do to recent events i'm about 95% sure that I have understood her way more than she did. :( 
And yeah.. it's hard to get close to people you don't trust... just another way that kinda hurt... because it showed she didnt trust me.  But that's three years dead now so dont be upset by it, these are just experiences you may find interesting and/or choose to learn from... idk

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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
People try to understand, but it can be really hard. It's different for everybody, we all need something different.
Yeah, everybody has feelings, and all we want is to understand ourselves and each other. But sometimes it gets to be too much. 
Well, I guess she wasn't ready to trust... It's a shame that this happens to people. You think you've helped them and they go and do it anyway. :/
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irishlad9216 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
OH I really didnt mean that she's dead! o.o I meant that issue, that breakup was three years ago and it doesnt bother me much any more @_@ 
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's awesome, did you stay friends at all?
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Tinyjellybeans134 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is one of the deepest poem and it will touch others heart
<3 great job
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you. :)
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Ninjacrab456 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
 This is one of the best poems I`ve ever read.
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :)
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Ninjacrab456 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome
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Lazy-Coffee Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Powerful, well framed but depressing.
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:iconjrrain:
jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you...
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:iconnakedoats:
nakedoats Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
angsty
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is that meant to be an insult, a complaint...?
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nakedoats Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
a fact
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, I see. Well, thank you. I really appreciate you telling me that. You should know that I can be incredibly angsty, but it isn't without cause.
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nakedoats Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
was it a boy?
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Who are we referring to?
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KittyMeow47 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good wow? (;
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:iconkittymeow47:
KittyMeow47 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it's beautiful (: I can definitely relate
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome, I love to hear that. (:
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ThexHiddenxPlotter Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Artist
Love the way it's angled.
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, that bit actually look me a while.
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ThexHiddenxPlotter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Artist
Well you did a good job on it. :)
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jrrain Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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